Living in the ocean

There are many things. Wonderland stays under the ocean and when you want to go there, there is one elevator that transports you.
There is one fountain made of nerds of many colors and there is one waterfall that is made of chocolate. It is calm there. Families are united and very happy. There is one swimming pool made of sundae, it’s yummy.
I live in one big mansion that has 6 floors. The first one is for the dinning room, the second for the kitchen, the third for candy, the forth for the restroom, the fifth for the swimming pool, the sixth for sleeping. I have fun when I play with my friend that lives in the clouds.
I live with my family and my boyfriend, and I love him. I’m the owner of this impossible dream !!!!


Great work, Nathalia!

Thanksgiving day

Thanksgiving Day happens on the 4th thursday of November . Thanksgiving Day is an American holiday when the people eat turkey and stay with their family.
I thank God because I have a family, friends, a house, a boyfriend and a School.


by: Rafaella Abritta ;D'

Leonardo Da Vinci
Leonardo Da Vinci was the best artist and scientist of his time. He painted the ''Last Supper''and the"Monalisa''. He invented the helicopter, the parachute, and the wars tanks.
He was arrested because he took corpses and opened them to lern things about the human body. Some time later he died in the prison. For me he was the most inteligent person I know.

Legalization of Drugs

The author of the article agrees with legalization of drugs because if they legalize drugs, there won't be wars in the slums anymore.
I disagree with the author because with the legalization of drugs the people that use drugs will increase and this is very bad.
However, I also agree with him because if they legalize drugs, there won't be wars in the slums anymore.

Check the article at

http://www.gargaro.comdrugs.html/

Wordeland - Living in the clouds

Living in the clouds

I live in the clouds of the cotton candy. I am a fairy, and there are one big chocolate waterfall, a milkshake fountain, and an ice cream mountain.
In my garden, there is a rainbow, with a treasure at the tip, there are many flowers and birds.
I live in one mansion, with 6 floors, each floor for each room. The first floor is the dinning room and living room, the second is the kitchen, the third is the bathroom, the forth is my bedroom, and the fifth is the special classroom. Finally the 6th has a pool, and it is the place where I make barbecue. In the special classroom, there is a tube with candy, mostly “Nerds”, and there are shelves with other candies.
I live with my friends and my mysterious boy. Here in my country all is peace and love.

Gabsdream

In my dream I live in one big city whose name is Gabsdream. There is a big sea with many boats, many karts, much chocolate and the karts drive in the water. And there is a little volcano which doesn't hurt people because it explodes chocolate.

My wonderland ;D'

Where everthing is possible (:

The name of my place is Where Everthing Is Possible. People live happily in this place . There are wonderful people in this place . These people love life , love the world and worry about the others and you learn very much from the others. This place has beautiful horses , perfect days , magic people and cotton candy clouds . This place where I want to live .I love this place because it is perfect .

WoderLand

There are many flowers with many colors in my wonderland, many horses, a lot of birds, one waterfall of honey, and everybody can fly like a bird.
Also, there are (too) one fountain of ice-cream and one wonderful rainbow that carries you to one swimming pool of golden coins.
I live in one mansion in the clouds. There are 6 floors: the first is for the dining room and living room; in the second floor is the kitchen, in the 3rd floor is the place that has one big room with nerds, loli pops, many candies, ice- cream, chocolates, and many things that I like to eat. The 4th floor has the TV room and the library, the 5th floor has the bedrooms and the bathrooms, then in the 6th floor there are the swimming pool and the material to make barbecue.

There I have a lot of fun with my friends!!

It is fantastic !!

WONDERLAND

My wonderland stays in neverland, for you to arrive there, you have to go straight and turn right at the second star.
The gnomes live there in the hamburger houses. It's a magic place where you never get sad. Everybody has friends, and all gnomes can fly.
There is a big chocolate fountain, my wonderland has a beautiful honey rainbow and a lot of unicorns. In the sky are the cotton candy clouds.The candies are the best and yummy candies of the world. Everybody comes here for a swim in the ice cream waterfall.
My wonderland is the best and all are happy there, because I love My Wonderland.

My best wave

I was in brasília but I was pripering to go to Rio de Janeiro. When I arrived in Rio I bought a very good and beautiful bord. But when, I was in the beach I got scared because

F1

F1 is a classroom for everybody that doesn´t bring material or doesn´t do homework or is late for class.

I´m at F1 now because the teacher told me to go to a class and observe what people are doing.I like this.

In this classroom there are 12 people.:9 girls and 3 boys.4 people are writing,4 people are wearing all stars shoes.Mariana my friend was there,and she was texting a friend.There´s no silence there.

F ¹¹ xD Mr. Paulo..class

In Mr. Paulo's classroom everybody is doing some work. Mr. Paulo is speaking English now. This class is for who is in adaptation. Alexandre is reading a book, Victória is doing the same thing that I am (writing about a class), Eduardo too. Mr Paulo is explaining for Anna Luisa what to do. At last, this class is organized.

Capital Punishment

Capital punishment is the harshest punishment for a person that comitted a hedious crime. The punishment can be by means of a lethal injection, gas chamber or electric chair. I think the crime has to be proved before capital punishement occurs. I am for punishing a person that comits a crime, but I am against it because the punishment, maybe, is painful and slow, like the electric chair or the gas chamber.

Publish here!

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Thanksgiving Day

Thanksgiving Day,

Thanksgiving Day is one American holyday that the American people thanks god, stay with their familyes. They eat turkey and have dinner with the family.
Thanksgiving Day is in U.S.A on 4 thurday of November .I´b thank god because I have good healh, one good family and one a good and wonderful dog!!!!!!!

bye, bye!!!!

Abortion

Josephine Baker is a writer and she wrote a report abaut abortion.For her, abortion, can't be legalized ,because in women , who are pregnant, there is a human being , like you.Pregnant women should have the baby,or she will kill a human being.
My opinion is really different. I think abortion has to be legalized, because most of the people , who stay pregnant, are adults, and they know what is better for them and for the baby.And she has to have the power to interrupt or not her pregnancy.

The Tooth

I was 6 eyears old,and my brother was 4 eyears old.We were cleaning our beautiful house,in Good Friday.My brother went to the beathroom and I was running in the house.The door was closed,and then,when he was coming,we bumped into each other ... My tooth flew and stoped in my father´s hand,I didn´t feel bad,but my brother did.Then I went to the dentist,the dentist said to eat a lot of Ice-Cream.But now the important is:

- My tooth is ok!

Christian, Luiz Artur, Guilherme and Lucas

MY TENNIS SCHOOL

My tennis school is in Asbac. There are 4 tennis courts. There are some boys and girls. There are teachers. There are beautiful trees. I love this school.

by Lucas Porto

My best friend

My best friend’s name is Hugo. He is angry sometimes, but happy and he is cool. He likes to play foosball. And he is my friend.

by Luiz Artur

My cats ran to my garden.

I have ten cats. One day my ten cats ran to my garden because I forgot to close the door. I tried to catch the ten cats but it was difficult. So I called my sister and together we caught my little kittens. That was my best day.

by Christian

My best friends

I have many friends. The names of my friends are Vitor, Wallison, Dudu, Christiano, and Alexandre. My friends are very cool. They give me many things, and Dudu gave one video game. I love my friends.

by Guilherme

Mr. Paulo's comment:

Nice shot, guys! It'd be great if you could post it yourself!

Leonardo Da Vinci

Leonardo Da Vinci was the best artist and scientist of his time. He painted the Last Supper and the Monalisa. He invented the helicopter, the parachute, and the war tanks.
He was arrested because he took corpses and opened them to learn things about the human body. Some time later, he died in prison.
For me, Da Vinci was the most intelligent person I've ever heard of.

Mr. Paulo's comment:

I was greatly impressed when I saw the Monalisa in Paris and the Last Supper in Milan, along with other art works by Da Vinci. But what I truly admire is the fact that he was a visionary! Thanks for sharing.

Composition

DiArY

One day I broke my foot and on the same day I had a casting for a model.
Lost one chance to go to Madrid, the U.S., and Europe. But I won one fashion show with Elite. I am very happy with what we learn from life.

Mr. Paulo's comment:

Rafaella, I edited your writing a little. Is this what you mean? Good to read your posts!

My horror story

My former school was very bad. I hated it. My friends weren't my friends, my mom didn't believe me, and I had to stay there for three years. My teachers were horrible, they didn't do anything. My nightmare finished when I came to the School of the Nations. I like the School of the Nations very much, and I love my friends.


Mr. Paulo's comment:

I'm very happy you enjoy it with us, Larah! Keep up the good work!

Colombia ** livia

I traveled to Colombia and when I arrived, I went to my aunt's house. We (my aunt and uncle, my mother and father, my cousin and my sister and I) went a restaurant called "André". It is a special restaurant ,because there is place for eating, and another place for children to play.
All the children (I, my sister, and my cousin) wanted to make a mask. I went last, but my cousin and my sister didn't wait for me, and when I arrived at the table there was no food. Then I asked for another plate with fries and I ate alone.
Finally my father and my uncle gave the girls a lecture because they didn't wait for me.


Mr. Paulo's comment:

What a great story, Livia! I'm glad you shared it with us. Do you still have the mask you made?

Composition

My friend Basevi .

Basevi is very nice, I love him and the loves me. He likes to play soccer and video game. He's my beautiful boy and friend. He has one fmily and a house. He's my best friend. I love him.


by:Rafaella Abritta

My diet

I like to eat different foods. I sometimes eat breakfast in my house. I always drink coke. I always eat some rice. I always eat meat. Ialso eat beans, but not every day. I sometimes eat ice cream and chocolate bar. I hardly ever add suggar to juice. I love fries, milk shake, spaghetti and coke. But I think my diet it is very yummy.


Mr. Paulo's comment:

Yes, it sounds yummy, but do you also eat healthy food sometimes? Add some fruit and vegetables to your diet, they can also taste great!

Research Livia and Nathalia - Mexico

Estados Unidos Mexicanos
United Mexican States


Capital(and largest city)
Mexico City19°03′N, 99°22′W
Official languages
Spanish (de facto)1
Demonym
Mexican
Government
Presidential Federal republic
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President
Felipe Calderón( PAN)
Independence
from Spain
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Declared
September 16, 1810
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Recognized
September 27, 1821
Area
-
Total
1,972,550 km² (15th)761,606 sq mi
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Water (%)
2.5
Population
-
2007 estimate
108,700,891 (11th)
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2005 census
103,263,388
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Density
55/km² (142nd)142/sq mi
GDP (PPP)
2006 estimate
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Total
$1.149 trillion (12th)
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Per capita
$11,249 (63rd)
GDP (nominal)
2005 estimate
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Total
$840.012 billion (short scale) (13th)
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Per capita
$8,066 (55th)
Gini? (2006)
47.3 (high)
HDI (2004)
0.821 (high) (53rd)
Currency
Peso (MXN)
Time zone
(UTC-8 to -6)
Internet TLD
.mx
Calling code
[[+52]]
1 See languages note (below): [1]

2 Bimestre - deveres, trabalhos, etc.

10ª Semana: (01 e 02/10)
Monday - No class
Tuesday - No homework

11a Semana: (08 e 09/10)
Semana Cultural

12a Semana: (15 e 16/10)
Monday: No class
Tuesday: Entregar a pesquisa (textos polêmicos)

13ª Semana: (22 e 23/10)
Monday: Workbook p. 36 and 37
Tuesday: No homework

14ª Semana: (29 e 30/10)
Monday: No homework
Tuesday: Workbook p. 40 and 41

15a Semana: (05 e 06/11)
Monday: Reading (leitura)
Tuesday: Reading (leitura)

16a Semana: (12 e 13/11)
Monday: No homework
Tuesday: Workbook p. 45 and 46

17a Semana: (19 e 20/11)
Monday: Apresentação de trabalhos (Ana Lucia, Ana Joaquina, Camila, Ediene, Karina, Priscila)
Tuesday: Apresentação de trabalhos (Patricia, France, Wandette, Sheila, Vanessa, Odneia, Laianne)

18a Semana: (26 e 27/11)
Monday: Revisão
Tuesday: Prova

19a Semana (03 e 04 de dezembro)
Fechamento de notas. Auto-avaliação e avaliação do curso. Confraternização.

New York City

New York City is a developed city because it is the center of tecnology, and it has (have) a lot of buildings and museums, like the American Museum of Natural History, and some others (musiuns), like the MOMA and culture of New York.
In winter all rivers get (iced) frozen and the temperature is cold(est)er than Brasilia because Brasilia is a hot city.
New York has many (torist) sights, like the Statue of liberty.

Milton, you need a conclusion for your interesting description of New York City.

The fun animals

The fun animals

Once upon the time three very fun animals lived in a very natural florest.

comment from Mr. Paulo:

I'd like to know more about the 3 fun animals!

A dog and a cat

One beautiful dog was walking (in) on the street and saw one cat. He remembered that this cat had a sharp claw(m) that had already (has) scratched and hurt (t)him. And he (thing) thought ´´I hate this cat, if I can I will (fiet) fight with him, but I am (very) too old``.
(In) The next week the dog saw the same cat and continued with the same thought. But one day the dog fainted on the street and (one) a car almost ran over him, but the cat saw it and saved his life.
The cat and the dog became friends for ever!

Good job, Ana!




Lesson:Never judge one book by cover.
By Ana Carolina.

my fable-by nathalia

The cat and the rat


Once upon a time there was one house (that have) with one cat and one rat but only the rat (is) worked for (found) food for Christmas and the cat only (eat and sleep) ate and slept.
When Christmas came, the rat had (many) a lot of food(s) (and) for the family (in) at the party.
The cat didn't work (and don´t) or have food and asked (to) the rat give to him (one) some cheese, but the rat answered "you don´t work, you don´t have food!!!"

Lesson: you have to work to achive (the) things.

Great job!

My composition -by:Lívia

Mother bird and little bird

One beautiful day ,in the city lived one bird. This bird is a mother and its baby bird wanted to fly.

The little bird tried to fly with its mother, but he fell on the grass. He got hurt but its mother helped its son.

Later they tried and tried and the baby bird could finally fly.

(The little bird) It flew and flew and after, with the help of the mother, he came back to its nest.

Lesson: try to do what you want.

Good job, Livia!

New York City

New York City is a big and bautiful city.There you have many things to do and to see,for example:visit the Statue of Liberty or go to big shops .there you have many things to buy for a low price. In the winter we can see snow on all the city. In the winter you can also go to a ring to play hockey and go ice-skating. In the summer you (only) can visit museums, like the American Museum of Natural History, (and) or go (to) for a subway ride.



Victor da Rocha Basevi

Good job, Victor, but you need a title and a conclusion for your description of New York City.

Guided Writing

I am Rafaella Abritta. I study at the School of the Nations .This is a very nice and cool school .There we have classes in three languages: Portuguese, Spanish, and English. I have a lot of friends . There are students f(o)rom other countries, like France, USA, and Brazil.
I like the School of the Nations; (this) it is very cool and fine.

Byeee

Good, Rafaella, but you need a title for your paragraph!

New York City

New York City is a wonderful place! It has very many big buildings, a lot of peaple, big markets, a lot of cars and very beautiful monuments! In New York City there is the American Museum of (M)Natural History. It's a museum that has a lot of interesting things. There, in New York, are a lot of statues. The most popular is the Statue of the Liberty.

But, there is not only civilization, there are also many animals. There, in NY (New York), there is a wonderful lake, where live many ducks. In New York, in winter, there is an iceskating ring, and a lot of pe(a)ople skate there. There is a reservoir that feeds all the pe(a)ople.

New York is a good place for films because many artists come from there. At night , New York looks (like a) wonderful (place), like Holliwood with all the bright lights. New York City is a wonderful place!!

Good work, Lukas, but you need a title!

The pig and the sheep

Once upon a time, lived a very fat pig and a sheep with a lot of wool. The sheep always made fun of the pig, because the pig is very fat and clumsy. The pig lived sad, because the sheep was beautiful and flufly. Once a year, the sheep had to cut its wool and the pig stayed happy, because the sheep was ugly and couldn't say anything about the pig.

Story moral: Don't (say) talk about (the) other people's problems, because it can be your problem too.

Good job Larah! Write a title for your paragraph!

SAN FRANCISCO!!!

San Francisco is a such a beutiful place that all should see it.There (have) are a lot of piers, and in the piers (have) there are good resturants, (exlents) excellent fast foods , and wonderful stores. Pier 39, for me, is the best one, (bacause) because (have) of (the) Fishermen's Wharf and Hard Rock Cafe.

All the people with a lot of money work in the tallest (one) building, the Transameric Pyramid, and I like (so much there) it a lot.

San Francisco (have) has the most beautiful briges, like the Golden Gate Bridge and Bay Brige. Both are tall and long.

In San Francisco (have) there are so (much) many parks, like the Golden Gate park, (have a) with lot of trees and it is so beautiful.

I like (so much) San Francisco a lot, but (in the) world (have) has so many places to go.


Alex, make sure you go through the entire writing process before you publish, so as to avoid excessive mistakes.

Marcos's mom

There was a boy whose name was Marcos. H(e)is m(a)other('s) died because she was very sick. She had cancer. The boy was very sad for his mom. He (doesn't) had(ve) (a) no brother (and a) or sister. His father ma(k)de him happy.




Eduardo, your story is rather unfinished! I would like to know more about ths boy.

*-_._-*Louis Braile*-_._-***by"Stella Facó de Carvalho

Louis Braile was a blind boy. He went to a school for the blind, but he didn't like the method for reading because the book was very big and heavy. His solution was to make an other method .This method is used today and is very simple.


Stella, you need a title for your composition!

Publish your paragraphs here!

It's time to publish your paragraphs and compositions!


I study at the school of the nations. It is a very good and cool school. There we classe(r)s in 3 languages Spanish, Potuguese, and English. I have a lot of friends. There are students from other countries, such as Brazil, USA, France, and Spain. I like this school.

Who are you?

ThE rEsCuE ***bY_VICKY ARAUJO***

On monday morning I was at a party with my son, but my son was on a float in the swimming pool.When I went to the restroom to make...you know!, my younger cousin pushed him.

I don´t know what was happening, but I felt desesperate and I panicked.

" Could my son have drowned? Did my son die?"

He was in a swimming pool and he can´t swim. I yelled. He swallowed water!

But then, when I got out of the restroom, I saw my dog with him in the garden!!

Oh! thank (g)God!my son was just playing!

Good job, Victoria, but write a title for your composition!

FIRE!!! ***BY_VICKY ARAÚJO***

I think yes that the fire is dangerous it finishes with the fauna and with the flora I have penalty of the animals… I have penalty of people… I have penalty of the bush… what could be made is to stop to burn… etc. what the man can make not to burn is not to leave the dry bush, watering down it always… etc.

THINKS ABOUT THIS… HELPS TO THE FAUNA AND THE FLORA!!!!!

VICKY ARAUJO 7B

nathalia medeiros

Hi mr.Paulo!!!

Yes I think that fire it is very dangeours.

I think the fire because the fire can hit one people and the people can died.

we can do many things like:

-don`t put fire in the forest and the trees;
-don`t throw cigarrete butts and others things.

but please don`t quill the fauna and flora!!!

ana carolina

hi mr.Paulo

yes i thing that fire is dangerous.

i thing the fire quill many things of fauna e flora.

we can do many things for help we flora like: don´t throw cigarette butts, don`t throw trash in the world and many things more.

My self

Hi!

I'm Rafaella .I have two brothes and one sister.His name's Renato and Luis Eduardo .Her name is Angelica . I love my LIFE. I like to eat, sleep, whatch TV and surfing in the net and futbol and friends and family . I'm a new stundent in the School of the Nations. I'm liking the school.They are all my friends, I like my teachers.I am in the english adaptation.
This is.....
byee

Hello

i am luiz i laik dog end englas. i em 11 iambunito

Fire!

Last Monday we found ourselves in a peculiar situation. There was a huge fire coming, and it was very close to us. I could actually hear it creeping and feel its heat. Although everyone got out safe and sound, some of the younger kids were scared, and classes were dismissed. The next day, lots of "homeless" bugs were all over the school. If you drive on the outskirts of the city, you'll notice that, sadly, much of the cerrado vegetation is burned, as it usually happens in the dry season. Do you think fire is dangerous? How do you think it affects our fragile ecosystem and its flora and fauna? What could be done to prevent fire? What can you do prevent it?

Here is Victor Basevi

Hello!

I like it but when I arrived in school I didn't have any friends in here.I like Math and Science,because I like numbers and stuffs about life and human being.Now I have many friends and I like our school very much.

Bye bye , Victor Basevi

Mr.Pauo

Hi,I'm Gabriel Tavares de Moraes Cardoso, I'm your student, I'm eleven years old, I like dogs,cats,soccer and music.

Bye.

How do you like school so far? Have you made any new friends? Which subject do you like best and why?

When I enter in school of the Nations all help me, I like my friends, I like my teachers, pricipalmente my english teacher. I have any friends in the school. I love art, because I love to draw and in my arts class I listen to music and I love music.

Myself

Hi!
I'm Larah, I'm very cool, fun and beautiful.I have one sister.Her name is Lívia.I love my dog, his name is Jocka.I like to eat, sleep, whatch TV and surfing in the net.I love to cook. I cook very well.I like my friends.
I'm a new stundent in the School of the Nations. I'm liking the school.They are all my friends, I like my teachers.
I am in the english adaptation.
I have green eyes, I'm very short and very cool!


Bye-Bye

Week 3: answers

I like my school because it is a very funny school, and because it's not far from my home. I am new at the school and I made already a lot of friends! I LOVE history because it is very interesting and because I really want to know the evolution of the humanity.

Bye!

Week 3

Hello, dear students!

Week 3 is almost here! I'm so excited with our program and we have lots of things coming up. Remind your parents to buy your book (see letter I handed you on Thursday), which will be sold as of Monday at the school.

For your week 3 posts, here's what I suggest:

How do you like school so far? Have you made any new friends? Which subject do you like best and why?

As for me, I'm truly enjoying being the ESL teacher grades 6-9. I like my classes, I have a flexible schedule, and I don't work on Fridays! But, hey, shhhh! You didn't hear this from me...

See you at school!

Mr. Paulo

hi, my name is guilherme

Hi!Im Gabriel Tavares i like sports and dogs.

Hi!Im Gabriel Tavares i like sports and dogs.

hello

hi, my name is ana carolina, i am 11 years old

i have one dog very quit (i love my dog and my famíli)

i like play with my friends,i love sleep and iceskate make me happy.

bye bye

what you like to do?

my self =D

hello!

my name is livia .I was born in Brasilia.I'm live in lago norte.
I have hobbys :listen the music, play with boll, skateroll etc...
I have 11 year old .
I have one dog is Jocka.I'm studdy in Scholl of the nation ,I'm new in the school .
I'm grade 6 .I have one sister his name is Larah. what make is me be my family.

the end . :)

my self

hello!

my name is nathália,I have 11 years old.
I have 2 dogs: bombom and lilica.
I love iceskate!
I love listen music!
iceskate make me happy!

BY!

Lucas

I am beuterfull.I have 10 yers.I play soccer

Hi!!!!!

Hi my name is victor.I like many things but I love to play soccer and computer games.Wen i do not have nothing to do i go to my room and sleep because it is so conftble and good.I lake study english,my objective this ear is pass in the level 3 to return to my old grade 8A

Hi!

Hi!I am Lukas, I am 10 years old, I study in the School of the Nations, I don`t have brothers and I am a very happy peaple.I like to play soccer, ride a bike, swim and play computer games.

My wish is, that I, in the future, play soccer in a team.I am happy when I play soccer.

Hello!

Hello everyone!

my name is ferancia,

My name is Eduardo. My robie is soccer

Anna Luisa

My name is Anna Luisa. I am 14 years old. I like study . What makes me happy is friends, family, go to shopping or park, swim

When I lurn something, when I did my hobbies,when I stay with my family , I stay so happy.

Greetings!

Hello!

This is the Blog for EDN's English adaptation class. We will talk about a different issue every week. Why don't we start by introducing ourselves?

There we go. I'm Paulo Seidl, a.k.a. Mr. Paulo. I am married and I have two daughters, aged 8 and 11. I have zillions of hobbies, but for now I'll say I'm a devoted swimmer, a kitchen freak, and an adventurous hiker and biker. Do you want to see me happy? Put me under a waterfall. What makes you happy?