3rd Draft
I can't stay hearing about hospitals anymore!!!!!
I've been to a hospital there, and there, and here, EVERYWHERE!!
I'm sick of it, I'm just a little sick, but I just have a headache and stuffy nose,
I just want to stay at home and sleep.
I always have to go to the hospital to take X-rays, injections, and other things.
If I hear this word one more time, I'm going to go CRAZY!!!!!!!!!
Mr. Paulo's tip - avoid the excessive use of punctuation (one exclamation mark shoud be enough). You wrote a rather informal text, but if you choose to be more formal, avoid the use of contractions (like I'm).
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