I can´t stand hearing abaut losing a run anymore.

I don´t like to lose a race,I´m not happy because it is horrible lose one ran when you make an effert. But to lose us very very bad.
I don´t underusted why I lose
I make an effert but I lose is very bad
Never lose a race

I can't stand hearing about Isabela any more!

All the people are talking about this fact that the Isabela's father and "mather" kill her. I agre that this is a horrible thing to do. Isabela was they own dauther.

I don't care if she die or not. This will never help my life. I can't stand hearing about her any mare. In the neews peaper are only talking about her only her.

I can't stand hearing about Isabela any more!!!!!!!!!

Old school new school

My old school, Mackenzie, was very big and, there was three swiming-pools. There were many students. Because of these I didn't have many friends. Al so there were fewer holidays.

My new school EDN is smaller than Mackenzie and don't have any pool. Here has fewar people. Because of that here I have o lot of friends. And here has a lot of holidays.

Al though my old school was bigger and with a lot of things to do, I fell beatle here.

The transfer of the portugues famili

The transfer of the Portuguese famili to brasil in 1808 brought good development to the contry. dom jone created the botanicgarden in Rio de Janeiro and he founded the Bank of Brazil. The contry Rio grew a lot.

We'll miss you Mr. Paulo Seidl

On this last week of holiday, these last classes, it was very good to have attended your classes, you are a great teacher and we like you, then have great vacation and wish us good luck in these tests.....

Thank you very much ---> Guilherme Ventocilla Franco.

I can't stand hearing about Isabella anymore

Some day ago a child was murdered in São Paulo. Her name was Isabela Nardone. She died in her father's apartament. This case was an explosion for the media.
The media overexposed the case (like I care), and I think it is pathetic. She died as other people have died, killed by nature or by society. People die in all the world. I don't care if a chid dies in the USA or in Brazil. I don't care if it was her father who killed her or if it was her stepmother. I don't understand why the media attributes a lot of importance to this. I think this is waste of time and I can't stand hearing about this case any longer.

I can't stand hearing about Isabela any more!

About one month ago a little girl called Isabela was murdered by her father. He threw her from the 6th floor when she was unconscious, and she died.
In all media I hear about Isabela: on the newspaper, radio, TV, magazines, etc. Besides, it is a case of futility. That is prejudice because all days a lot of poor people die in São Paulo and nobody cares, but if a little "rich" girl is killed by her father, all the Brazilian media stops most of the news just to talk about Isabela's case. Also, most people don't want to see this type of news but they have to see just because the only thing passing is the Isabela's case, which isn't so important to me.

I can't stand heading about FLUMINENSE anymore!!!!

I can't stand hearing about Fluminense anymore , because the Fluminense team is very bad and people don't have a clue!!
The flamengo team is very good!!
I'm hearing things about it, on the NEWS and TV and from people and friends that have a bad teaste. In conclusion, all people that root for Fluminense are very stupid, and the Flamengo's team is the best team of the Brazil!!!!!
Goo Flammengo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can´t stand hearing about the Isabela case anymore!!!

In Brasil everybody is talking about the Isabela case, I can´t hear about it anymore.

It's horrible to know that a F-A-T-H-E-R killed his own daughter. It happened like this: Isabela, her father, her stepmother, and her brothers were at a party. Then Isabela cried because she wanted something, and her dad got mat at her. Then, on the way home, her stepmother punched her. The father thought she had died, but she hadn't, she was just unconsious. Finally, the father threw his daughter out the window.

After this, investigators discovered that the father and the stepmother were the criminals.

Mr. Paulo's tip - finish your posting with a conclusion, which should express the idea brought about in the title.

I can't stay hearing about HOSPITAL anymore!!!!!

3rd Draft

I can't stay hearing about hospitals anymore!!!!!
I've been to a hospital there, and there, and here, EVERYWHERE!!
I'm sick of it, I'm just a little sick, but I just have a headache and stuffy nose,
I just want to stay at home and sleep.
I always have to go to the hospital to take X-rays, injections, and other things.
If I hear this word one more time, I'm going to go CRAZY!!!!!!!!!

Mr. Paulo's tip - avoid the excessive use of punctuation (one exclamation mark shoud be enough). You wrote a rather informal text, but if you choose to be more formal, avoid the use of contractions (like I'm).

Icarly & Ned's Declassified School Survival in School

Icarly and Ned's Declassified School Survival in School are sitcoms on Nickelodeon channel, but Icarly talks about survival tips in school. The main character of Icarly is Carly, who does a TV show. Ned's main character is Ned, a boy who writes a book about tips to survive in school. Icarly started last week and Ned's Declassified School Survival in School began a long time ago, so Ned's sitcom is more famous. I like them! They are so good!

executive # garbage man

An executive makes more money than a garbage man, so an executive is rich and a garbage man, poor. The execultive is busier because of his work. He arrives home at night, and he doesn't have time for his family. Usually he has a better house, and a garbage man has a worse house, but he has a home. The life of a garbage man is simple, and the life of a executive is sophisticated. The work of a garbage man is better because, he helps the world, but not the executive. But for me the garbage man is a champion!

by: Livia Bernades

The girl

She's cold and she's cruel

but she knows what she's doin'

Exactly how to cross the world

and see everything

and never be satisfied

just when I see those eyes

cause she's bittersweet

she knocks me off of my feet

and I can't help myself

I don't want anyone else

she's a mistery

she's to much for me

but I keep comin' for more

she's just the girl I'm looking for ..

Larah Verdolin and Rafaella Abritta (Inspired by songs : Just the Girl - Click Five

Hello Beautiful - Jonas Brothers)

Ayrton Senna and Nelson Piquet

Ayrton Senna was a Formula 1 champion, but he died. He was a very good pilot and his race car was a black Lotus. He never gave up of Formula1. Nelson Piquet was 3 times champion and he didn't die, because he gave up Formula1. The two pilots are very good because they were F1 racers. For me, they are champions, but I prefer Ayrton Senna, because I think he was a very very good pilot. Too bad he didn't finish his career!

Stella- My new and my old school"

INEI, my old school didn't have an after school program. We had classes from 8:00 am to 3:30 pm . We just had one break . When we finished class, we would go to our house for lunch. But there were few people and the good thing was, we knew everyone.
EDN, my new school, is very cool. It has a lot people and a lot of homework, but it is cool, and we know people that we never considered meeting. For example, my best friends are a Colombian boy and an American girl. Of course, there are Brazilian people as well, but there are people from other nations, and the teachers are very cool. I like them so much, althougth some of them are demanding. In the end, I prefer the School of the Nations, because of the new people that I knew, and the other subjects that there aren't in others schools...I like my new school so much!

Change of school

My old school is Isaac Newton and it is located in Riacho Fundo I. The school is located five minutes from my house. It is big but not very, and not very pretty, but they have a multi-purpose court. There I had few friends. My new school is the School of the Nations and it is located in Lago Sul. The school is located thirty five minutes from my house, it is big, not very pretty either, but they also have a multi-purpose court, plus a soccer field. And here I have more friends than in the old one.

Although the old school is closer to my house and a little nice, I prefer my new school because it is bigger than the old one, there is a soccer field, and I have more friends. Anyway, the change of school was something good to me.

My new/old School

My Name is Guilherme, and I'm a student at E.D.N. and my old school is Marista. Marista is located in Asa Sul, but E.D.N. is located in Lago Sul. But, about the classes, Marista has 6 periods, but E.D.N. has 8 periods.
However, Marista has only 40 min. of break, E.D.N. has 2 breaks, one with 20 minutes and the other with 1 hour of break. In Marista, ALL subjects are in Portuguese, except English, but, E.D.N. has 5 subjects in English, 1 in Spanish, and the rest is in Portuguese. As a resault, I prefer E.D.N., because there are more recess time.

My School

My old school was big, and it was in Asa Sul. The color is blue and the name is Marista. There were many students as well as lots of classes, but there was no party and fewer holidays than here.

My new school is small, so there are fewer students. Also, there are few classes and many parties. My new school is in Lago Sul, that's better because it is next to my house; the color of my school is red and there are more holidays than Marista. The name of my new school is School of the Nations.

They are different, but I like both so much.